WWW: One word: Genius. I love the concept and out of all the groups I feel that yours is the one that is best suited to the target audience. You have captured the gamer sense of humour and created a compelling reason to keep TV alive. Well done.
EBI: All I can think of is that the timing on the storyboard is very generous.
LR: Can you revisit these and see where you could cut it down to 30 seconds (industry standard)? You can add the new timings, next to the relevant shot number, as a comment beneath this comment.
WWW: One word: Genius. I love the concept and out of all the groups I feel that yours is the one that is best suited to the target audience. You have captured the gamer sense of humour and created a compelling reason to keep TV alive. Well done.
ReplyDeleteEBI: All I can think of is that the timing on the storyboard is very generous.
LR: Can you revisit these and see where you could cut it down to 30 seconds (industry standard)? You can add the new timings, next to the relevant shot number, as a comment beneath this comment.
Timing
ReplyDeleteShot 1: 3 Seconds
Shot 2: 3 Seconds
Shot 3: 4 Seconds
Shot 4: 5 Seconds
Shot 5: 2 Seconds
Shot 6: 3 Seconds
Shot 7: 2 Seconds
Shot 8: 3 Seconds
Shot 9: 5 Seconds
WWW: It appeals to your target audience.
ReplyDeleteEBI: You had added colour onto your images.